Need a second pair of eyes on AU fic

One of the bingo prompts was sensory deprivation, and that kinda reminded me of the floating tube thingy in Stranger Things, and I wrote a little something for it.

Trouble is, it’s a short something - so I’d appreciate if someone who isn’t familiar with Stranger Things look it over and see if there’s parts that wouldn’t make sense to the average reader.


I can do it if you would like? I haven’t watched stranger things (it’s admittedly on my ever growing to watch list.)

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sweet!!! now let me figure out how dms work on this server